Wednesday, April 22, 2009
Quote of the post: ""You(You) have the power with me(I) to make it us(We)." - Quote about You - Sachin Kumar Gupta
At the first, I started thinking about u within You. Like 'Quality is incomplete without u.' But then I thought, It will be too much to have the last vowel - u. I don't want bulk of u. Everyone writes about me, I am putting something in poetic words (I tried) not about u, but about You.
I feel younger with you.
I feel more joyous with you.
I feel younker with you.
that's why I care you.
Layout can't exist without you.
Bayou can't move without you.
Youth can't have power without You.
that's why I cherish you.
Sometimes I feel amyous with you.
Sometimes I feel embryous with you.
Sometimes I feel annoyous with you.
Even though, I am incomplete without you.
that's why I admire you.
Buyout is not possible without you.
Tryout is really tough without you.
Payout is tasteless without you.
that's why I need you.
You always have you in your wor[l]d.
YouTube - video sharing site, can't be without You.
I am sure, youse are not bored of you.
that's why I love you.
This is something about you,
be it with you, or without you.
In yourself, feel the power of you.
that's why I dream you.
- Yourn (Yours) Sachin Kumar Gupta (Sach)
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At the first, I started thinking about u within You. Like 'Quality is incomplete without u.' But then I thought, It will be too much to have the last vowel - u. I don't want bulk of u. Everyone writes about me, I am putting something in poetic words (I tried) not about u, but about You.
I feel younger with you.
I feel more joyous with you.
I feel younker with you.
that's why I care you.
Layout can't exist without you.
Bayou can't move without you.
Youth can't have power without You.
that's why I cherish you.
Sometimes I feel amyous with you.
Sometimes I feel embryous with you.
Sometimes I feel annoyous with you.
Even though, I am incomplete without you.
that's why I admire you.
Buyout is not possible without you.
Tryout is really tough without you.
Payout is tasteless without you.
that's why I need you.
You always have you in your wor[l]d.
YouTube - video sharing site, can't be without You.
I am sure, youse are not bored of you.
that's why I love you.
This is something about you,
be it with you, or without you.
In yourself, feel the power of you.
that's why I dream you.
- Yourn (Yours) Sachin Kumar Gupta (Sach)
Other Poems: Blink of an eye Parameters Differ
What is itch Happy New Year Home Sweet Home
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13 comments:
nice...u have a great control on ur words
an unusual "u" poem :D , gr8 creativity
i like this ....
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You me aur hum...this "you poem" was great dude..
A very different poem. good creativity. nice work!
Neetu.
Liked ... liked ... liked :)
A different yet nice poem !!
Btw check out my blog too :
http://www.sourav-pandey.blogspot.com/
Hi Sachin,
very original. i like it. very good attempt.keep it up.
awesome..I liked it..something new :)
Hi Sachin,
Regarding your comment on my blog, you may note that even Amitabh Bachan has mentioned in his blog : http://bigb.bigadda.com/. Even TOI has an article on that. This is just FYI since you are young and of an impressionable age and may think that i have offended some sensibilities.
But still i will say this. I still respect your view.
YOU..............
nice work done by YOU....
really good.....
its really nice.........
it vibrate my strings.
You write nice poems.
Awesome Ppoem Sachin.
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